My favious(favourite/favorite) movie(TV series) is <<Qian fu>>(Lurk 不写书名号，用斜体).I think it is very funning(funny) and it really has something foy(for) everyone. This is Sun Honglei's latest movie(TV series). I think he is a great movies(movies 改成 actor 演员). However, it's too long and sometimes it doesn't interest me as much. But this is really (a) great movie(TV series) for us.
首先，《潜伏》是电视剧，不是电影。英语中的书、电影、电视剧是不加书名号的，而是将其名称斜体且首字母大写。
你查查《潜伏》的片头图片，它的英文表达是lurk，不能用拼音。
此短文的表达还是比较清楚的。但要批评你的是，那么多单词拼写错误，觉得拼写拿不准为什么不自己动手查字典？这是你自己能解决的事啊！
要是没有字典就下载个有道桌面词典，挺好用的。